I meant to write that I love the way you laid it out. It's like she's looking at him, experiencing that moment of deja vu, and all those other scenes flash through her head in that brief instance of time. However, if you've never read the fic, you can create all these alternate narratives. A day in the life, a fight, the first date, etc.

You know what would be really cool? If you did another piece, or even used this one, and challenged the comm to write fics based on the art. I'd be interested to see what gets produced.