ext_134199 ([identity profile] elffriend26.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] renisanz 2010-04-12 03:36 am (UTC)

Penny takes the encouragement, leans back in and sips at his bottom lip.

I loved this line. The build up of details in this story was excellent. Lovely work.
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