Thanks for the critique. Ariadne's face has been bugging me, actually, and you've pointed out just what I need to fix. :) I thought her face looked too slim, but I wasn't sure. As for the feminity...the fic called for a dress that had guys taking notice, so I tried to come up with something that did that but still fit her personality. :/
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Date: 2010-08-11 06:28 am (UTC)