renisanz: angelo, jono, & jubilee watching tv (s/p kiss clr)
renisanz ([personal profile] renisanz) wrote2010-03-22 02:48 am

art: "The Paradox Continuum" . G . BBT . S/P

Title: "The Paradox Continuum"
Artist: renisanz
Medium: pencil
Rating: G
Warning/Spoilers: Spoilers for the fic.
Notes: This is for [livejournal.com profile] evening_shadow  for her donation during the [livejournal.com profile] help_haiti  drawing. She requested that I just illustrate something from one of her fics. I chose to do something for "Finding the Proper Tense." This was supposed to be just simple, unshaded line art that I would then ink. My muse seemed to have other plans. *sigh* This will be colored, too, but that will take a while, and things are going to be busy for the next week or so. I'm puttin up the pencils for now. It will also give me time to stare at it and find any glaring errors. At one point, Penny's hand in that top panel only had three fingers.

Teaser:



[identity profile] dashakay.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 12:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, lovely!

[identity profile] qblackheart.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
This is breathtaking - truly! Fabulous work! I especially love the details but my fave is Sheldon's hand as he's cupping Penny's face. Just something about his watch hidden by her curls. So much love!!!

I don't have an 'i iz ded' icon.

[identity profile] evening-shadow.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
"I shall call him Squishy and he shall be mine and he shall be my Squishy." *glomp* MINE!

<3

[identity profile] blackicejane.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Awe that is soo full of Win I can't even start!

My heart totally melted on the 3rd Panel there is just so much tenderness and love in that :)

[identity profile] split-the-ocean.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
This is amazing! Penny in the second panel is perfect, so realistic. My favourite part is the hug, something about the way his arm is around her arm and her waist, I dunno but I stared at it forever!! :D
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[identity profile] menacherie.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 02:55 pm (UTC)(link)
HOLY Sweet bejeeus. This is amazing in all the right places!

I love all the detail in the second panel. :D

[identity profile] misskoum.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I do believe I love you. :D

Your pencil work is incredible! Can't type. Must admire.

[identity profile] d-sieya.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 04:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Guh. I love it when your art magically appears, it's always SO beautiful. All of the panels are wonderful, but I particularly love the last one. You REALLY have Sheldon's awkward hugging down, but you made that one appear much more earnest, somehow.

[identity profile] mrsvc.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 04:28 pm (UTC)(link)
OH, RENI, SO GORGEOUS.

[identity profile] takineko.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 04:48 pm (UTC)(link)
**MELT**
OMG WE NEED MORE COMICS

[identity profile] evelynvaughn01.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 05:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this so much! "Finding the Proper Tense" is my favorite P/S one-shot EVER, and seeing it illustrated so perfectly just adds to the wondrousness. I love those scenes, where we finally get the kiss and where they're on the sofa together and when Sheldon tries the eggs -- and you caught it all. Thanks for drawing/sharing this!

[identity profile] geekgrrl3.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
love love love it!

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. :)

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 06:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you. :D

You know, I really like adding Sheldon's watch detail. It's just one of those things I always have to remember to put in...and I see now that it's missing in the second panel.

[identity profile] mirei-nochi.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 06:57 pm (UTC)(link)
this is really beautiful! made my day :D

[identity profile] mrssnape13.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 07:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I like how the last one looks like how Sheldon usually hugs Penny, but then the CONTEXT of it is just so tender and moving and... D'aw. This was great! :)

[identity profile] muuskanuikkunen.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 07:52 pm (UTC)(link)
D'awww. Also, you have some mad skillz! I'm truly taken aback by your masterful usage of lineart. I can't wait to see the coloured one!

[identity profile] drummingsong.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 08:03 pm (UTC)(link)
OH. OH. HOW LOVELY. OH MY GOODNESS. I don't have words! I do have this gif, however, which is representative of my feelings on the drawing:

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Re: I don't have an 'i iz ded' icon.

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 08:15 pm (UTC)(link)
&hearts :D :D :D

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 08:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, thank you. :) I figured it was 'bout due for me to draw another S/P kiss. ;) Good to know that the hug turned out well.

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I went a little insane in the second panel, definitely, but I'm glad how it turned out. :)

Re: <3

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 08:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I was going for "tender" so I'm glad that came across. :)

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-22 08:48 pm (UTC)(link)
&hearts Thank you. :)

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, we do. I think [livejournal.com profile] irrel first did S/P in comic form. Thanks. :)

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 01:30 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. It is a really great story and I always look forward to [livejournal.com profile] evening_shadow's new work. :) I tried to do justice to her lovely word pictures.

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. :)

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, glad to hear that. Thank you. :)

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 02:16 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)

[identity profile] fujiidom.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
GUH. The final cap on the left is really what kills me most. The hand on the cheek. Their faces. EXCELLENT, as usual. :D

[identity profile] boonies.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
...wow. This is just a billion kinds of awesome. Each panel is more amazing than the last, which theoretically shouldn't be possible, but here we are. WTF, dude.

(And that last one... god.) I don't think I read that fic, but I don't actually have to -- I get it from that last scene alone. Guh.

Absolutely love the shading and the detail and the LIKENESS, CHRIST, the likeness! Okay, I'm shutting up now, but just know that the sound you heard a few minutes ago? Was my jaw hitting my laptop.

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] janetmajorsnyc.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
it's just amazing. Really, the likeness is undeniable! The embrace is... sigh... delightful!

Re: I don't have an 'i iz ded' icon.

[identity profile] ladylioness.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I meant to write that I love the way you laid it out. It's like she's looking at him, experiencing that moment of deja vu, and all those other scenes flash through her head in that brief instance of time. However, if you've never read the fic, you can create all these alternate narratives. A day in the life, a fight, the first date, etc.

You know what would be really cool? If you did another piece, or even used this one, and challenged the comm to write fics based on the art. I'd be interested to see what gets produced.

[identity profile] lillanilla.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 05:18 pm (UTC)(link)
*sigh* I can´t wait to see this colored, although I love your line art as well. Especially the kiss is just fantastic, so realistic and lifelike! ^^

Re: I don't have an 'i iz ded' icon.

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 08:23 pm (UTC)(link)
It's like she's looking at him, experiencing that moment of deja vu, and all those other scenes flash through her head in that brief instance of time.

Oh wow. That's exactly how I meant it to be interpreted. :D

If you did another piece, or even used this one, and challenged the comm to write fics based on the art.

I really like this idea. I'm actually participating in the exact thing with [livejournal.com profile] trekreversebang. Maybe I could crop off the top (because it's so specific to your fic) and submit the bottom 3 panels and see what ideas people think of.

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
*hee*

I will accept your gift and raise you a:

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[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-23 09:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you. :)

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-24 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. It's going to be quite a task to get this colored, but I'm eager to do it. :)

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-24 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow. Thank you for the wonderful comment. I'm so glad that the way I drew the hug really seems to resonate with people.

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-24 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. :D

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-03-24 03:50 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I can't lie, I do enjoy drawing S/P kisses. :)

[identity profile] lillanilla.livejournal.com 2010-03-24 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
can´t blame you for that ;)

[identity profile] she-burns1.livejournal.com 2010-04-05 12:57 am (UTC)(link)
THE BEGINNINGS OF MY COMMENTING THE HECK OUTTA THESE POSTS!

PART 1! :D

I like the panels in this - also...I like Penny's butt - lol. And the attention to detail, Penny's apartment and Sheldon's watch as he holds her face to kiss her. Just so sweet!

[identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com 2010-04-05 01:38 am (UTC)(link)
Her butt, huh?

That's actually a really difficult feature to draw head on. Thank you. :)