renisanz: angelo, jono, & jubilee watching tv (s/p sleepover)
renisanz ([personal profile] renisanz) wrote2010-05-01 10:43 pm

art: "Just the Rain" [G] . BBT . S/P

Title: "Just the Rain"
Artist: [livejournal.com profile] renisanz 
Medium: pencil
Rating: G
Spoilers: None
Prompt: [livejournal.com profile] awmperry : From The Summer Shower Precipitation...
Disclaimer: The pencil lines are my own.
Notes: I read this fic a while back when it was first posted, and I rather liked it, for the most part, particularly the scene requested in the prompt. I've drawn S/P in the rain before, but this had a completely different feeling so I was glad to revisit the theme and interpret it in a different context. I'm definitely better at drawing them now than I was before. I'm quite proud of how Sheldon turned out, especially. :)

Teaser:





The prompt in full:

From The Summer Shower Precipitation; Sheldon's woken Penny up in the middle of the night, taken her up to the roof in pouring rain because he has "something important" to tell her. Now his Walter Koenig-signed Star Trek umbrella's been blown away and they're up there in their robes and pyjamas in the rain, but Penny won't let him dodge the issue this time:

“It’s just rain, Sheldon.” She took his hand in hers and leaned on the railing beside him. “Say it.”

“’It’s just rain, Sheldon’?” He frowned. “What good will that do?”

She glanced sideways at him, eyes smiling out from under her drenched hair.

“Say what you wanted to say.”

“I... forgot.”

She turned fully towards him and took a step closer, bringing her body to within inches of him.

“Sheldon, honey, this is what we do. I’m not Leonard.”

“Thank Krypton for that,” he said, “or this would be a lot more awkward.”

“Stay on target, gold leader,” she breathed, closing in on him. “He lets you stay in the paddling pool. I’m throwing you in the deep end. Say the words. Trust me, if it’s anything like what I think you want to say you don’t need to worry about the outcome.”

He took a deep breath to calm himself; he was shaking, though even he wasn’t sure if it was out of cold or terror. “I think... I can’t. I can’t.”

He sank to the decking, curled up with his back to the railing, and buried his face in his crossed arms. Penny sank to her haunches beside him and draped an arm across his shoulders.


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Feedback is lovely. :)

[identity profile] bja727.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, your drawings are always so amazing!! I love them :)

Great story so far... will you continue it?

[identity profile] misskoum.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 03:53 am (UTC)(link)
This made my heart throb. Like...really...throb. You're amazing. =)

[personal profile] impalalove 2010-05-02 03:55 am (UTC)(link)
Aw. ♥!

[identity profile] evening-shadow.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, poor Sheldon. *pets*

[identity profile] an-ardent-rain.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is so lovely. You did a wonderful job with both of them - I really felt for Sheldon. Great job!

[identity profile] lyly-hameron.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 05:13 am (UTC)(link)
Oh this is so lovely!

[identity profile] boonies.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 05:16 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, holy crap, there's just so much emotion here. Everything--from their poses to the background--is absolutely brilliant. ♥

[identity profile] slybrunette.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 05:36 am (UTC)(link)
Amazing work! I always fail to comment on your pieces and I need to rectify that because they absolutely blow me away. Starting now :)

[identity profile] awmperry.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 07:31 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, very nicely done. Really good likenesses, and it exactly captures the tone I was going for. Kudos to you!

(And hey, if you find yourself with the time and inclination, I'd be flattered if you'd fancy having a stab at scenes from my other fics.)

[identity profile] weasleytook.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 08:05 am (UTC)(link)
You know how I'm always like PENNY'S HAIR OMG? Well, I still feel that way, but dude... SHELDON'S HAIR OMG. I love the way it is laying in this piece, you can tell it's a little wet from the rain and just looks PERFECT. There's a lot of emotion packed in here altogether, so it's just beautiful.

And I love all the canon details you use too, like Sheldon's pajamas and slippers, and Penny's robe and her little Ugg boots.

Another wonderful piece. :)

[identity profile] split-the-ocean.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 09:02 am (UTC)(link)
Okay so this. This just... it makes me want to cry.
It's all in Sheldon's pose and the way he's so... IDEK, curled up around himself? And sad? And Penny's arm around him just makes my heart do weird, weird things.
ALSO, I SEE SOME OF SHELDON'S WATCH PEEKING OUT. YOU KNOW HOW I LOVE SHELDON'S WATCH. ALSO PLAID. WHICH I LOVE EVEN MORE THAN HIS WATCH. OH MAN I'M DEAD.

[identity profile] nami86.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 10:06 am (UTC)(link)
it's stupid but I just LOVE how you draw her feet/shoes !!
great as usual :)

[identity profile] mrssnape13.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 12:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm flailing over the same things as weasleytook! Sheldon's hair is awesome! It looks like Sheldon's hair...in the rain! ^^ I also really appreciate the canon clothes because it just brings it all together so nicely.

[identity profile] d-sieya.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww that is so adorable; the drawing REALLY captures the scene

[identity profile] hondagirll.livejournal.com 2010-05-02 10:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Is it weird if I say I love how detailed Sheldon's striped pajamas are? Because while I LOVE the rest of the drawing (It's adorable!), for some reason I keep coming back to Sheldon's pajamas. I LOVE THEM AND I DON'T KNOW WHY. ♥

[identity profile] jatelexzielit.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
This is perfect ♥

[identity profile] boosh-smeg-who.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 09:42 am (UTC)(link)
I can't decide which is more beautiful, the picture or the prompt. They both just completely stir something in me! I agree with you about the way Sheldon looks in this, he's fabulous!! The whole scene is moving :)