Hey, an update. Not the one I was hoping for, but I like this, too.
Very nicely written. I have to say, after watching "The Lost Tribe" I was rather disappointed. It just didn't seem like Jen when she told him she was interested in someone else. And who's to say it won't turn around later this season.
Anyway, this is nicely written. This flows very nicely, and it makes sense, too. I like Jen throwing her weapon. I'd be frustrated, too.
I like to believe she will still continue her sparring lessons with him, and the way you've written this makes sense in that regard. She would want to continue, but he would probably hesitate. He's been hurt, even if he'll never admit it, even to himself. This makes it all seem okay.
She lied to him. To herself.
Ronon vowed to be there when she finally realized it.
Yeah.
Can I convince you to expand upon this, maybe show us how they end up together (cause my poor Ronon/Keller heart would love to see a happy ending to this unhappy turn of events on the show)?
Pretty please?
Really though, good job, and thank you for sharing.
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Date: 2008-10-16 11:54 pm (UTC)Very nicely written. I have to say, after watching "The Lost Tribe" I was rather disappointed. It just didn't seem like Jen when she told him she was interested in someone else. And who's to say it won't turn around later this season.
Anyway, this is nicely written. This flows very nicely, and it makes sense, too. I like Jen throwing her weapon. I'd be frustrated, too.
I like to believe she will still continue her sparring lessons with him, and the way you've written this makes sense in that regard. She would want to continue, but he would probably hesitate. He's been hurt, even if he'll never admit it, even to himself. This makes it all seem okay.
She lied to him. To herself.
Ronon vowed to be there when she finally realized it.
Yeah.
Can I convince you to expand upon this, maybe show us how they end up together (cause my poor Ronon/Keller heart would love to see a happy ending to this unhappy turn of events on the show)?
Pretty please?
Really though, good job, and thank you for sharing.