renisanz: (s/p glomp)
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Title: "The Warmth Experience"
Artist: renisanz
Medium: pencil
Rating: G
Warning: None.
Prompt: [livejournal.com profile] a_flame_within : one from a drabble of mine. Cause it's summer-y. (posted below)
Notes: I drew this twice. Scroll down to see my rants on the thing.




Now, y'all might think this drawing is fine and I'm just being crazy. Just trust me, it will be better the next time around.
This was good practice, though.

Meh.
. . . . . . . . . .

So, I'm nuts. I redrew the thing.

Teaser:





The drabble:
For someone who had grown up somewhere so cold, Sheldon marveled at how much she looked like she had been raised on a beach. She spread out her towel and laid down on her stomach seeming to be joining his campaign to ignore Leonard as he dug through the cooler and complained about sand getting everywhere. Sheldon pulled off his own shirt and sat on the ground next to the blond giving up his stigma about sharing for a moment to perch on the edge of her oversized towel. Neither of them spoke as they sat in the sun with their eyes closed, both of them enjoying the warmth sinking into their skin.

I like this much better. A lot less shading, and more in my current "style." Don't know if I'm completely finished with this, though. May tweak a few things (some clouds would look nice in the background).

Also, my scanner is kind of crappy with picking up the detail in the shading. You can't even see the tufts of chest hair that I drew. :/ My dslr camera does a better job.

But enough of my whining... Enjoy. :)



Added a bit of background and recycled paper texture:


Now I think I'm done. :)

Date: 2010-04-06 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] patronuscharms.livejournal.com
They both look so at peace, like they're sitting in the best part of Santa Monica just as a nice breeze is wafting through...

Date: 2010-04-06 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. I guess it helps that I live on the Gulf Coast. :)

Date: 2010-04-06 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] d-sieya.livejournal.com
Oh my god!

I loved the first one, the likenesses were very true, but the second one! Penny is so adorable I just want to grab her and hug her. (I mean, I won't tell you what I want to do with Sheldon, but.)

Love <33

Date: 2010-04-06 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. The first one isn't bad, but it lacks personality, I suppose. Glad you approve of Penny's face. :)

Date: 2010-04-06 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] split-the-ocean.livejournal.com
This is definitely on of my absolute favourites of yours. Their faces... I can't even... THEIR FACES! THEIR FACES ARE SO PERFECT! OMG, seriously how are you so good? One other thing I love is Sheldon's hands; I love their position, and his fingers and... pretty much everything. ♥

Date: 2010-04-07 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
\o/ So glad yo like their faces. Sheldon's hand are probably my favorite part of it. Thank you. :)

Date: 2010-04-06 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] allthingsholy.livejournal.com
These are amazing. As always.

$hearts Thank you.

Date: 2010-04-07 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Yay! You're welcome. :)

eeeeee.

Date: 2010-04-06 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evening-shadow.livejournal.com
The first one was indeed not your best, but the second one? *gasp* Sheldon looks incredibly hot. You can almost see the sun beaming down on them. It's truly gorgeous, S.

Re: eeeeee.

Date: 2010-04-07 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Glad you see what I mean about the first drawing. It just wasn't me, ya know? Good to know Sheldon looks good. He actually came out a lot better when I drew him more from my instincts.

Date: 2010-04-06 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jazzrose343.livejournal.com
This is just as Gorgeous as the first one but this is just as lovely. The way they are sitting enjoying the sun and the detail of their faces and positions is so good!

Wondeful as always &hearts

Date: 2010-04-07 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2010-04-06 08:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evelynvaughn01.livejournal.com
Oh, I love them! I can just imagine the murmur of the surf, the sun's gaze on their skin, the taste of salt and fish in the air, and just a breath of breeze. Mmm!

Thank you for showing us such a comfortable, happy scene for them. They're beautifully drawn as ever. The closed eyes speak volumes!

Date: 2010-04-07 02:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you for the wonderful comment. It's a joy to read your thoughts and I appreciate you taking the time to write them. :) I'm glad this image is resonated so strongly with y'all.

Date: 2010-04-06 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrssnape13.livejournal.com
My favorite part? Penny has no problem lying down in the sand, while Sheldon sticks to perching on the towel's edge! Perfect. :) I can seriously smell the salty air when I look at this!

Date: 2010-04-07 03:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Actually, both of them are laying on the blanket, as Sheldon doesn't seem to mind sharing in this instance.

Date: 2010-04-06 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dianelyn.livejournal.com
I like them both, but the second one is just perfect with the expressions and the body language.:)

Date: 2010-04-07 03:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2010-04-06 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misskoum.livejournal.com
I'm in love with the serene expressions on their faces in the second picture. The tilt of Penny's head just--What's the word I'm looking for?--encompasses the I-wanna-soak-up-the-sun feeling. Brilliant contours. =)

Date: 2010-04-07 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. :D I am really happy with how the lines turned out. :)

Date: 2010-04-06 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fujiidom.livejournal.com
AAAAH. HIS HAIR AND HIS NECK AND POSTURE. This is both gorgeous and oddly hot while being so serene. SO GOOD. ♥

Date: 2010-04-07 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thanks. Glad you like it. :D Your capslocked comments make my day. :)

Date: 2010-04-07 12:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elffriend26.livejournal.com
The second one is definitely superior cause we can see their wonderful expressions. Penny is lovely, but I love Sheldon's presence in the second one. Hope that makes sense. You really feel that you're looking at a six foot plus guy. His size contrasts with Penny and I like that. I love his expression the best. It's Sheldon at a rare relaxed moment, but it looks totally in character for him. He's really lost in sunning himself. In short: me likes. :)

Date: 2010-04-07 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. Glad you like their expressions and body language. I wanted the calm, serene feeling to come across in this piece. :)

Date: 2010-04-07 01:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] she-burns1.livejournal.com
Ahhhh - this captures summer so well it almost makes me sleepeh! :D

I love the look on both their faces - and clouds would be lovely - I can almost hear the ocean! <3

Date: 2010-04-07 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

I've added the clouds. :)

Date: 2010-04-07 10:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] she-burns1.livejournal.com
Eee! I came back for the clouds and they were worth it! I like the background - it makes the picture more complete! :)

Date: 2010-04-07 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sa-4-geeks.livejournal.com
I like the first one, but I love the second one. A big part of that is because you can see the looks on their faces.

Date: 2010-04-07 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. I didn't think I would draw the second one with them in the same positions relatively, but it worked out. :)

Date: 2010-04-07 03:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rumpled-tulip.livejournal.com
They're both wonderful, but the second one especially has that "basking in the sun" look to it. You have captured their faces so perfectly!

Date: 2010-04-07 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2010-04-07 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stephaniejane2.livejournal.com
The two pictures make a lovely set, with the different perspectives. You really do have Penny & Sheldon "down" at this point. (lucky us!) Sheldon really does look like he's drifting off to sleep in the 2nd one, it's such a peaceful tone. As I see it, with the first one, the focus is on their bodies (his ribs, her curves, etc.) so I can see why you did a second one, if the idea was to match the tone of the drabble - you had to show their faces. Ok enough from me. thank you for sharing your exceptional talent with all of us!

Date: 2010-04-07 02:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
I agree that the first drawing has its own strengths. Now, I look at it as more of a study that prepared me and loosened my lines up to draw the second one.

Thank you. :)

Date: 2010-04-07 05:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] irrel.livejournal.com
So cute! Love it :D

Date: 2010-04-07 02:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2010-04-07 07:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elleokay.livejournal.com
Perfect!

Now I want to head to the beach... even if that means it's an 8 hour drive!

Date: 2010-04-07 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you. :)

Fortunately, I live on the coast, so the beach is only an hour drive for me. :)

Date: 2010-04-07 09:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spaceanjl.livejournal.com
I love that second drawing so much, - little things like the freckles on his shoulders and Sheldon's very slight smile. And Penny's face. They are just comfortable with each other. I like the way she is utterly relaxed and basking, and he still has that slight tension in him.

Date: 2010-04-07 02:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Hey, chica. How've you been? *hugs*

I'm so glad you can see the freckles. I wasn't sure if anyone else would really see them if I hadn't mentioned it...

Anyway, glad you like it. Thanks for looking. :)

Date: 2010-04-07 09:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] boosh-smeg-who.livejournal.com
I just envy you sooooo much. I never really totally realised just how amazing you are until I saw this. The detail, the lines, the heart that goes into it...it's just basically flawless and inspiring every time I see something from you. I worship you!! :)

Date: 2010-04-07 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Oh wow. What a comment to start my morning. Thank you so much for the kind words. I do put a lot of thought into these drawings to make them fun for y'all to look at, and I'm so glad that you appreciate it. :)

Date: 2010-04-07 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yavie-namarie.livejournal.com
Oooo, pretty! I especially like the one with the background and texture. =D

Date: 2010-04-08 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2010-04-08 02:52 am (UTC)
damalur: (bbt → dr. winkle callling)
From: [personal profile] damalur
So gorgeous! I meant to tell you how much I enjoyed the tutorial you posted, too - I'm no artist, but I loved getting a behind-the-scenes glimpse into your process.

Date: 2010-04-08 02:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you for commenting. It is good to know that you enjoyed the tutorial even though you're not an artist.

Date: 2010-04-15 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrsvc.livejournal.com
&hearts &hearts &hearts &hearts &hearts &hearts

Date: 2010-04-16 06:00 am (UTC)

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