art: "Feeler" [G] . Inception . a/a

[renisanz]

Title: "Feeler"
Artist: renisanz 
Medium: Pencil, a bit of tweaking in Photoshop
Characters: Arthur, Ariadne
Rating: G
Warnings/Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters. The pencil lines are my own.
Notes: Just wanted to draw Ariadne fiddling with Arthur's tie, really.

Teaser:





I must give JGL props for difficulty. His facial features were quite a challenge to get right; there's still something weird going on with his head but I'm calling it a draw. Apparently, Ellen Page looks very similar to Rose Byrne and I didn't even know until I drew this. 

Feedback is lovely. :)

ETA 8.08.2010 | 7:35 PM CST: fixed their head sizes to be more proportional, adjusted Arthur's hairline just a smidgeon.

Comments

[severedscythe.livejournal.com]

Augh this is LOVELY. <3<3 I love the looks on their faces. Your art is gorgeous!

[zekuromu.livejournal.com]

hahaha your icon.

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you. :) I tried to make their expression telling.

[fermine.livejournal.com]

This is gorgeous. Thank you for sharing! I love Ariadne's expression and the shape of her face. :)

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Thank you. :)

[sorrynotsorry.livejournal.com]

I really think you nailed JGL's profile here, but I think you made Ariadne slightly too feminine (if that's possible). I really like your linework, it's very sensitive.

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Ah, I see what you mean. Though, maybe being in the presence of the point man brings out the girliness in her. ;)

[sorrynotsorry.livejournal.com]

It's very likely! ;D Again, it's a lovely piece all the same.

[irishcookie.livejournal.com]

Beautiful! I love the looks on their faces and the way she is holding his tie - it's like we've intruded on an intimate moment!

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I like to draw scenes where it looks like the characters are right in the middle of something. :)

[duckcrab.livejournal.com]

This is wonderful!

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[stopmotionscene.livejournal.com]

hi, there. (:
this is so detailed and amazing. it actually caught me off guard, the beauty of it. ♥

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Oh wow, that's great to hear. Thank you. :D

[secretsmile90.livejournal.com]

Wow. That looks great. You're incredible talented. :D

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Thank you. :)

[ficliously.livejournal.com]

I love the way you draw folds of clothes. And hair. I also love her freckles. The red on his tie is gorgeous. The only thing I'd say is that their heads look just a little too big for their bodies. But that might actually be the style you're going for. Either way, beautiful work!

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Yeah, the head proportions is something I continue to struggle with in my art. I might try to adjust it later. Thanks for the critique. :D

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Tweaked the drawing some more and uploaded the new version, jsyk. :)

[ficliously.livejournal.com]

Oh, see, now it's perfect!! :D

[na-shao.livejournal.com]

Oh, I love your way of drawing. Great job. <3

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much. :)

[damalur]

So, so gorgeous. ♥ I'm more than a little mesmerized by the details of their sleeves.

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Thank you much. :D

[myfloralbonnet.livejournal.com]

♥ Gorgeous! I love the way you drew their hair and the details in their shirts.

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)

[thatreevesgirl.livejournal.com]

Awww, so cute, cute, cute! I love simple gestures of affection and this captures that so well.

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Thank you. :)

[sandie-eggo.livejournal.com]

I'm lurking around your journal, so you may see me post comments here and there...this is so cute. I think this is my favorite of all your a/a drawings.

[renisanz.livejournal.com]

Lurk away. I appreciate every single comment. :) Thanks so much for taking the time to look and leave your thoughts. :)

[autumnrhythm30.livejournal.com]

The detail to the shirts and her hair is amazing. :D