renisanz: angelo, jono, & jubilee watching tv (ariadne)
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Title: Untitled
Artist: [livejournal.com profile] renisanz 
Medium: Pencil, Photoshop CS2
Rating: G
Warning/Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: The pencil lines are my own.
Notes: A scene from All That We Keep (Part II) by [livejournal.com profile] namistai8 .

Teaser:





She wakes up to the smell of coffee and something baking in her kitchen. Groggily, she walks out of her bedroom to find Arthur with his brown poplin shirt sleeves rolled, a snowy white chef's apron protecting his brown worsted wool pants (did she even own a chef's apron?) bustling about in her kitchen. There are two cups of espresso waiting, steaming. Milk in one of those saucer pouring thingies, and sugar in a sugar bowl. There are sprigs of lavender in a plain white vase next to them.

"Morning," Arthur says breezily. "Coffee is ready, don't let it get cold," he adds over his shoulder as puts on oven mitts. As if him making breakfast in her apartment was a daily occurrence.

Ariadne stays rooted where she is, wondering if it's a dream.

—Excerpt: "All That We Keep (Part II)" by [livejournal.com profile] namistai8 
 
I think this is my most successful attempt as far as getting Ariadne's features right. For some reason I tend to draw Arthur from the back. His profile is hot, I guess.

I may have to go back and fix Arthur's gaze. Can't tell if he's quite looking directly at Ariadne like I intended.

I also scanned this with my iPhone, because I'm that lazy. As a result, the darkness of the pencil lines is rather uneven. Meh. A coffee stain texture was added in Photoshop.

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Feedback is lovely. :)

Date: 2010-12-09 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cunning-croft.livejournal.com
This is gorgeous!

For some reason the strings on his apron and her pants stand out to me especially, as well as the thought bubble (<3) and Arthur's bum, quite frankly. :)

Date: 2010-12-09 10:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thanks. I really tried to get the details right so I'm glad to hear that the apron looks ok. :)

SQUEE!

Date: 2010-12-09 05:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namistai8.livejournal.com
I really enjoy Ariadne's facial expression, particularly around the eyes.

And uhhh... Arthur's butt. DAMN.

But let's face it, if anyone woke up to Arthur making you breakfast I'd also question reality.

I like the coffee stain on the entire pic as well.

And uhh... HOLY CRAP! Fan art to go with FIC! Best thing EVAH. And uhh... so making a link in my journal for this.

Re: SQUEE!

Date: 2010-12-09 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. It means a lot that you like it. The image has been in my mind since reading the fic; your description was so perfectly vivid.

Re: SQUEE!

Date: 2010-12-09 09:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
I wanted to add that I would like to do art of Ariadne and Robert. I haven't tried to draw him yet. :)

Re: SQUEE!

Date: 2010-12-10 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] namistai8.livejournal.com
PLEASE!

Btw, I'm so pleased to hear that my writing created an image that you couldn't shake from your head. I try to make it as 'real' as possible.

I blame my love for Russian writers for the metric ton of description in my writing.

Date: 2010-12-09 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nami86.livejournal.com
this is precious!! (you gave me the envy to read this fic)

Date: 2010-12-09 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thanks!

I think you meant that I gave you the "desire" to read the fic. I know in French that the phrase would be something like, "J'ai envie de..." maybe that's where the confusion is. :)

Date: 2010-12-09 11:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nami86.livejournal.com
i always do this mistake (cause envy and envie are very similar :P)

Date: 2010-12-09 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kirstenlouise.livejournal.com
Aw, this is so adorable! I love Ariadne with her messy hair and her pajamas and how tiny she looks next to Arthur.

Arthur's ass is fantastic, by the way. I thought you should know.

Date: 2010-12-09 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
LOL. Thanks. :)

While watching the movie last night I noted how tiny Ariadne was next to Arthur, especially in the scene where he was teaching her about the paradoxical architecture.

Date: 2010-12-09 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sandie-eggo.livejournal.com
Your artwork is lovely. Arthur being BAMF in the kitchen is one of my favorites and I'm glad someone put the words into a picture. Very, very nice.

I especially like Ariadne's bishop thought bubble.

Date: 2010-12-10 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you. :D

Arthur is totally awesome in the kitchen. Brain canon. Though, it would be hilarious to read a fic where Arthur was actually a horrible cook even though everyone else expected the opposite. :)

Date: 2010-12-09 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] we-reflamingos.livejournal.com
"For some reason I tend to draw Arthur from the back"

I can think of one very good, pert reason. And may I say you've captured it very well indeed. VERY WELL.

Date: 2010-12-10 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Yeah...

There are a lot of reference pics that I have with him from the back or in profile. Yeah.

Glad you like it. :)

Date: 2010-12-10 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stephaniejane2.livejournal.com
You really should get paid to do this. You are amazing!

Date: 2010-12-10 03:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
I should. ;)

Thank you. :)

Date: 2010-12-10 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xonancy.livejournal.com
Beautiful illustration, love the details you put into them :)
i love how Ariadne's totem pops into her mind first thing! And Arthur's being as casual :P

Date: 2010-12-11 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. Glad you appreciate the little touches that I try to put in every drawing. :)

Date: 2010-12-10 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emily-gordon.livejournal.com
arthur has a great ass haha

Date: 2010-12-11 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thanks. :)

Date: 2010-12-10 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] koushi.livejournal.com
Beautiful! I love your style and the subtle details.

Date: 2010-12-11 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

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