Title: Untitled
Artist:
renisanz
Medium: Pencil, Photoshop CS2
Rating: G
Warning/Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: The pencil lines are my own.
Notes: A scene from All That We Keep (Part II) by
namistai8 .
Teaser:


I may have to go back and fix Arthur's gaze. Can't tell if he's quite looking directly at Ariadne like I intended.
I also scanned this with my iPhone, because I'm that lazy. As a result, the darkness of the pencil lines is rather uneven. Meh. A coffee stain texture was added in Photoshop.
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Feedback is lovely. :)
Artist:
Medium: Pencil, Photoshop CS2
Rating: G
Warning/Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: The pencil lines are my own.
Notes: A scene from All That We Keep (Part II) by
Teaser:

She wakes up to the smell of coffee and something baking in her kitchen. Groggily, she walks out of her bedroom to find Arthur with his brown poplin shirt sleeves rolled, a snowy white chef's apron protecting his brown worsted wool pants (did she even own a chef's apron?) bustling about in her kitchen. There are two cups of espresso waiting, steaming. Milk in one of those saucer pouring thingies, and sugar in a sugar bowl. There are sprigs of lavender in a plain white vase next to them.
"Morning," Arthur says breezily. "Coffee is ready, don't let it get cold," he adds over his shoulder as puts on oven mitts. As if him making breakfast in her apartment was a daily occurrence.
Ariadne stays rooted where she is, wondering if it's a dream.
—Excerpt: "All That We Keep (Part II)" by
namistai8
I think this is my most successful attempt as far as getting Ariadne's features right. For some reason I tend to draw Arthur from the back. His profile is hot, I guess."Morning," Arthur says breezily. "Coffee is ready, don't let it get cold," he adds over his shoulder as puts on oven mitts. As if him making breakfast in her apartment was a daily occurrence.
Ariadne stays rooted where she is, wondering if it's a dream.
—Excerpt: "All That We Keep (Part II)" by
I may have to go back and fix Arthur's gaze. Can't tell if he's quite looking directly at Ariadne like I intended.
I also scanned this with my iPhone, because I'm that lazy. As a result, the darkness of the pencil lines is rather uneven. Meh. A coffee stain texture was added in Photoshop.
.
Feedback is lovely. :)
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Date: 2010-12-09 05:46 pm (UTC)For some reason the strings on his apron and her pants stand out to me especially, as well as the thought bubble (<3) and Arthur's bum, quite frankly. :)
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Date: 2010-12-09 10:56 pm (UTC)SQUEE!
Date: 2010-12-09 05:53 pm (UTC)And uhhh... Arthur's butt. DAMN.
But let's face it, if anyone woke up to Arthur making you breakfast I'd also question reality.
I like the coffee stain on the entire pic as well.
And uhh... HOLY CRAP! Fan art to go with FIC! Best thing EVAH. And uhh... so making a link in my journal for this.
Re: SQUEE!
Date: 2010-12-09 09:08 pm (UTC)Re: SQUEE!
Date: 2010-12-09 09:27 pm (UTC)Re: SQUEE!
Date: 2010-12-10 03:16 am (UTC)Btw, I'm so pleased to hear that my writing created an image that you couldn't shake from your head. I try to make it as 'real' as possible.
I blame my love for Russian writers for the metric ton of description in my writing.
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Date: 2010-12-09 06:04 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-09 11:09 pm (UTC)I think you meant that I gave you the "desire" to read the fic. I know in French that the phrase would be something like, "J'ai envie de..." maybe that's where the confusion is. :)
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Date: 2010-12-09 11:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-09 06:22 pm (UTC)Arthur's ass is fantastic, by the way. I thought you should know.
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Date: 2010-12-09 11:22 pm (UTC)While watching the movie last night I noted how tiny Ariadne was next to Arthur, especially in the scene where he was teaching her about the paradoxical architecture.
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Date: 2010-12-09 07:55 pm (UTC)I especially like Ariadne's bishop thought bubble.
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Date: 2010-12-10 03:28 am (UTC)Arthur is totally awesome in the kitchen. Brain canon. Though, it would be hilarious to read a fic where Arthur was actually a horrible cook even though everyone else expected the opposite. :)
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Date: 2010-12-09 10:17 pm (UTC)I can think of one very good, pert reason. And may I say you've captured it very well indeed. VERY WELL.
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Date: 2010-12-10 03:17 am (UTC)There are a lot of reference pics that I have with him from the back or in profile. Yeah.
Glad you like it. :)
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Date: 2010-12-10 02:52 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-10 03:26 am (UTC)Thank you. :)
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Date: 2010-12-10 07:12 am (UTC)i love how Ariadne's totem pops into her mind first thing! And Arthur's being as casual :P
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Date: 2010-12-11 07:00 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-10 02:27 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-11 07:01 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-10 05:46 pm (UTC)no subject
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