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Title: It Takes Time to Get It Right (Glimmer)
Author: renisanz
Category: Romance/Adventure
Summary: Ronon “kidnaps” Jennifer on her first day off in ages. Things don't go as he planned.
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 5,755
Warnings: Spoilers for Season 5.
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters (save for an OC) or Stargate. This is just for fun, not profit.
Notes: Written for the 14 Days of One Sweet Love Ficathon at [livejournal.com profile] sg_onesweetlove. Prompt: Jennifer's first day off in a long time -- Ronon "kidnaps" her for the day. Set after “The Seed.” I'm referencing my fic “Breathe In Breathe Out” for a bit of development on Ronon and Jen's relationship. Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] sezjara and [livejournal.com profile] journeyman07 for beta'ing.

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—Chapter 1—


“Where are you going?”

Jennifer gasped and whipped around to come face to face with a very displeased looking Satedan.

“I'm . . . I was . . . uhm,” she stammered, unable to fight the blush that was quickly rising in her cheeks. She was so busted, but she thought she might attempt to salvage the situation. “I was just headed to the infirmary to check a few things and . . . Did you need something?”

“It's your day off,” Ronon pointed out.

“Yes, but I was just. . .”

"Going to work?" he supplied, a single dark eyebrow raised in question.

Maybe, but she wasn't ready to lose this battle just yet.

Before she could speak again, Ronon asked, “Did they page you?”

“Well. . .no,” she admitted.

“Is someone dying?”

“They could be. . .”

“But they're not now,” he stated. “I think they can handle it,” he said. By they, Jennifer knew he meant her medical staff. She would not have hired them if she felt they could not do an adequate job of managing the infirmary in her absence.

“Come on,” he said, before she could utter another word of protest. He clasped her hand in his, and it took Jennifer a moment to get over the shock of the sudden contact.

Jennifer didn't realize she was frozen in place until Ronon gave her hand a gentle tug. She looked up into his eyes, saw the hint of a smile playing at the corners of his lips before he stated once more, softer this time, “Come with me.” The “please” was in his tone.

. . . . . . .

“So, where are we going?” Jennifer asked as she tried to ignore the curious looks she was getting from passers-by as she was led by the hand down the hallways of Atlantis. If Ronon noticed the looks they were getting, he didn't show it. But then, he didn't let other people's opinions bother him.

“Ronon?” Jennifer prodded when he didn't answer.

He glanced down at her, but didn't slow his pace. That smile was at his lips again. “You'll see,” was all the explanation that he gave.

Jennifer sighed.

Ronon gave her hand an encouraging squeeze, and her heart quickened to the pace of her feet as she hurried to keep up with Ronon's long, sure stride.

. . . . . . .

Jennifer held up the strips of fabric that were meant to pass for a swimsuit top. Ok, maybe it wasn't so small, but she was sure to feel very exposed when she sported the attire in front of a very handsome Satedan who was waiting just outside the door. His bathroom door, Jennifer thought, looking as she let her gaze drift over the rather spacious room.

Suddenly curious, Jennifer bit her lip in concentration as she slid open the glass door of the cabinet space, above the sink and just below the mirror. She reached for the curious shaped, amber looking bottle, but her hand stopped when she saw a small, cylindrical black bottle in the far corner of the space. She reached for it instead, turning it over in her hand to read the distinctive English lettering.

“Oh my gosh. . .” Jennifer whispered, barely stifling a laugh. TAG.*

A gentle rap on the door startled her, and the bottle nearly slipped from her hands. She caught, it, clutching it to her body, as she blushed furiously.

“You ok in there?” Ronon's deep voice asked.

“Uhm. . Oh. . .yes. I'll be out in a bit,” Jen replied. She looked regretfully at the gift bag on the counter.

. . . . . . .

Ronon looked up at the sound of the bathroom door sliding open. He'd been pretty nervous about the soundness of this plan that Sheppard had first suggested. The female expedition members he had talked to had been a lot more helpful and reassuring.

“Though I am not particularly familiar with the mating customs of the 'Lanteans,” Teyla had said, “I believe that she will appreciate most your efforts in this endeavor.”

“You're saying she'll like it that I tried?” Ronon asked for clarity. That didn't sound terribly promising.

Something tugged one of his dreads, and he looked down to the bright eyes and giggling face of Torren, Teyla's infant son. Ronon carefully put his hands under the child's arm, lifting him from his lap. Torren didn't let go of the hold he had on his dread, though, looking at his quizzically before decided it might be a good thing to chew on.

Ronon made an amused face and plopped Torren back down in his lap, pulling the hair from his grasp. Torren made a noise of protest, and Ronon cocked his eyebrow at the babe in response.

Teyla remained silent during the exchange between her son and the Satedan. She smiled when Torren, seeming to realize that Ronon's dread would not be on his feeding menu, stuck his thumb in his mouth instead.

Ronon nestled the little one more comfortably against him and leaned back stretching one leg across the length of the sofa on which he sat. refocusing his attention on the discussion at hand. “The Doc's been cooped up in the lab even more after that Wraith parasite. She needs a break.”

“Yes,” Teyla agreed. “She needs to have . . . fun.”

Ronon nodded, taking time to study the knitting Teyla was working on. She said it was meant to be a sweater for Torren, but the size didn't look quite right, and one sleeve the sleeve she was doing now looked a lot longer than the one she had already completed. He said nothing of it though.

Teyla then looked up at him, an idea dawning. “Perhaps you should inquire of one of the female members of Jennifer's staff. They most likely share many things in common with Jennifer, or at least they could offer more insight into what actions would be appropriate for you to make your interest known to the doctor.”

Ronon nodded. That didn't sound so bad. But then he realized that he didn't really know Jennifer's staff well enough to even begin to ask such a thing of one of them. That would leave him where he started.

“Try asking Nurse Ko,” Teyla suggested.

“You mean Marie?”

Now, as he took in Jennifer's appearance in the clothes he had gotten for her, he was beginning to feel more sure. Though, he was concerned about the way she lingered in the doorway before walking fully back into the main room of his quarters. She'd taken her hair down and pulled it into a looser ponytail.

“So. . . I guess we're going swimming?” she said, finally. She pulled slightly on the pale green string of the swimsuit top that peeked out from the neck of the sleeveless, yellow shirt that she wore over it. It was a strange sensuality he found in the action, as she unwittingly drew his attention to the smooth skin of her neck.

“Yeah. . .,” Ronon nodded, his voice more unsteady than he liked. “This is what your people wear for it, right?”

“Yes, that's right,” Jennifer confirmed as she glanced down at her attire. She seemed to be relaxing somewhat.

“So,” she continued, eyeing him none too shyly. “What do you wear for swimming?” she asked. She must have wondered at his attire of his usual sleeveless, brown shirt and loose-fitting brown pants.

Ronon leaned down to pick up a large backpack from it's place beside his bed, and then shouldered the bag and turned back to Jennifer before replying, “Nothing,” as he took her hand and began heading toward the door.

Ronon was nearly snatched back as Jennifer displayed an unusual amount of strength, not moving when he had pulled her with him. He turned to see her eyes the size of dinner plates, her face growing redder by the second. “What?” he asked, trying hard to keep his face neutral.

“You mean . . .?,” Jennifer blinked, shaking her head. He didn't miss the way her eyes lingered on his lower body before darting back up to meet his mirthful eyes.

“Yeah,” he shrugged. “Something wrong with that?”

“Oh . . . yeah . . . I'm mean, no. . . if that's your . . . the way you. . .,” she stammered.

Cute as he found her when she was flustered, Ronon decided to offer her a bit of comfort. Maintaining his hold on her hand, he adjusted the pack on his other arm, and with his free hand he lifted up the hem of his shirt to reveal the top of his swim trunks that was visible just above the waistband of his pants. Ronon let her take in the sight before dropping his shirt back down.

“I hate you,” Jennifer said after a moment, but a smile was already curving the corners of her pretty mouth.

“Mmm,” Ronon grunted with a wink.

This time she let him lead her out of the room.


—Chapter 2—

Jennifer squinted, lifting a hand to shade her eyes from the bright sunlight that flooded into the transporter when the doors opened. She lifted her face, taking in the warming rays as she stepped with Ronon out onto a narrow walkway that ran along the outer edge of the structure. Jennifer peered over the waist-high guard rail and down to the ocean several feet below them and then out across the expanse as it met the horizon. The blue sparkling blue expanse was literally breathtaking.

“Wow,” she breathed.

“That's not the best part,” Ronon's beard tickled her neck as he spoke, and she shivered. She turned to face him, not expecting him to remain so close behind her. She craned her head back to look into his face, and her breath caught in her throat once more. His eyes were so beautiful in the light—a unique mix of amber and green that reminded her of a mood ring.

Ronon had a strange look on his face. He lowered his head, and leaned his head towards her. Oh my gosh . . . Jennifer's heart raced as she was pretty sure he was about to kiss her. She hadn't really prepared herself for this possibility. But before she could stress more over how to respond, his nose passed millimeters away from her cheek, and then down the side of her neck, and she felt the cool sensation as he inhaled the air just above her now goosepimpled skin. He was. . .smelling her?

“Ronon?”

He finally leaned away from her, a quizzical expression on his face. “You smell . . . different,” he mumbled.

“Different?” Jennifer repeated, suddenly self-conscious. She turned her head, lifted her shoulder to her nose to get a whiff of what could be so 'different' about her scent. She blushed immediately when she realized what it was. TAG. She must have gotten it on herself when she'd been startled earlier.

“So. . . what's the big surprise?,” Jennifer asked, looking away and down the walkway. She did not feel as relieved as she expected when Ronon finally stepped away from her and followed her gaze.

“Come on,” he said, taking her hand.

. . . . . . .

Ronon caught up with the woman in the infirmary one afternoon. When she saw him, she looked and smiled. She was the only other member of the medical staff who didn't cower in his presence. The other was Jennifer. This was the woman who had stood her ground and chosen to stay and assist Carson when he had attempted to remove and explosive tumor from Dr. Watson.

She must have figured he wasn't there for her, which was understandable, since she quickly looked back down to the sorting task she was doing. She didn't look up again until Ronon stood beside her at the table where she sat.

“Oh, hello, Ronon,” she smiled again.

“Hey,” greeted, trying his best to sound friendly, or at least non-threatening.

“I think Dr. Keller is at lunch,” she said in a calm voice. “If you come back in a few minutes you might catch her then.”

“I know,” Ronon said. He had actually waited until a moment he knew Jennifer would be out of the infirmary (which was quite a rare occurrence nowadays) to come.

“Oh,” Marie said, her smile faltering.

Ronon figured he'd better get to his point. “I. . . uh . . . wanted to ask you something,” he started, “about the Doc.”

Marie patiently regarded him, waiting for him to continue.


“Oh . . . wow,” Jennifer gasped.

She spun around to face Ronon, the brightest smile he'd ever seen lighting her face. Just as quickly, she spun back around, taking more time, he suspected to absorb the sight before her. “I knew there had to be a pool around here somewhere,” she said.

“How did you even find it?” she asked as they walked down a short flight of stairs to the level of the pool area.

“I was running out here a while ago and came by it.”

“Really?” Jennifer said, cool. The floor sloped down gradually into the pool, and Jennifer stepped cautiously to the edge until the water lapped against the toes of her sandals. She jumped back suddenly and turned into him. “How do you know there's not some creepy-crawling Ancient experiment swimming around in here?”

He couldn't blame her trepidation as he had wondered the same thing. “I asked Zelenka to come check it out. He said it's safe. I swam in it to be sure,” he shrugged.

“Uhm, ok,” Jennifer mumbled, not sounding as relieved as he hoped.

Ronon decided to give her a little more encouragement.

. . . . .

Jennifer stifled a shriek as her legs came off the ground and a strong arm came around her back to balance her. She whipped her head round to see Ronon's face split in a devilish grin. “What are you doing?!,” she asked as she squirmed against him. Instinctively, she threw her right arm around his neck to hang on. A second later she noticed that her skin was in direct contact with his bare upper body. He'd managed to strip down to his swim trunks without her even noticing.

Now he was carrying her towards the water, and she was still fully clothed. “Ronon!” she wrapped her other arm around his neck. Bu the time he stopped walking the water was up to his thighs. “Ok, I'll get in, just. . .not in all my clothes. Please take me back,” she pleaded.

“Ok,” he said. He turned and waded his way back to the shallow end of the pool.

Jennifer was pretty sure he was enjoying torturing her like this. Still, she secretly enjoyed the feeling of being this close to him, his muscular shoulders beneath her hands. When she felt Ronon lowering her legs to the dry tile of the poolside floor, she was reluctant to let go of him. She willed her arms to come from around his neck, and after a moment her mind won out. She forced herself not to stare at his chest as it was right at her eye level now. She had seen him shirtless dozens of times before, but this was . . . different. Usually she was the one doing all the touching, most often while sewing up such some impressive gash he'd sustained out on a mission or while sparring. And his hands had never before touched and lingered on her hips as there were right now.

She kicked off her sandals and then unbuttoned and shimmied out of the khaki capri pants that Ronon had given here. She'd have to ask him later how he managed to find and pick out all the things he had gotten her. She pulled the tank top over her head and then folded it and the pants and placed it on a bench against the wall.

Jennifer was immensely thankful she had maintained her resolve to start working out after she, Col. Carter and Rodney had escaped from that collapsed mine shaft. So, while she was far from having the stunning physique of Teyla, she still managed to look pretty good in a swimsuit, particularly this one, she thought, and wondered again at how Ronon would have known.

. . . . .

Ronon drew near to his destination near the end of the trade district in one of the larger townships on Mira. It was late evening, and most of the shops had and street vendors had closed down for the night. Light splashed onto the quickly darkening streets from the windows of inns and taverns, which would remain open far into the night. He turned right left onto a narrow side street, and was glad to see the that the window of a particular shop remained illuminated.

When he entered the building, a bell jingled on the door signaling the arrival to the shopkeeper. He saw her standing on a stepladder, putting away a ream of fabric on a shelf against the wall near the rear of the shop.

“We are closed,” she said, but when she glanced back at the entrance of the store, she froze in place. Her blue eyes widened and quickly warmed to him.

“Ronon Dex,” she beamed, stepping down from the ladder.

It was Ronon's turn to look surprised as he took in the slight yet noticeable swell of her abdomen. “Seraih Maerek,” Ronon smiled in return. The young woman quickly covered the length of the shop and embraced him in a tight hug.

“It is good to see you. It has been too long,” she said after pulling away, seeming to take in his appearance.

“Likewise,” Ronon agreed. He studied her as well. The better part of a year had passed since he'd seen her last, but he was glad that she was well, still surviving in a galaxy had seen so much loss over the last few years. Her hair had grown out considerably, her dark curls now several inches past her shoulders. She had it gathered in a low ponytail to the side, fastened with a bright orange ribbon of cloth.

“I am sure you did not come all this way to stare at me all evening,” Seraih teased him. “I know I've gained a bit of weight.”

Ronon smirked, rolling his eyes at her cheeky tone. He had missed her sharp sense of humor and directness. “Congratulations,” he said, meeting her eye.

“Thank you,” she said, a rosy tint spreading across her freckled cheeks.

“So,” Seraih said after a moment, taking a sit on a nearby stool, “What business do you have for me?”

“Something different,” Ronon replied, leaning against the counter as he reached to retrieve the papers from his back pocket. The specs he knew she would need.

Seraih took the proffered pages, and he watched the intrigue play across her features as she first unfolded the pages, and then the curious interest as she took in the images before her.

“I know it's not your usual thing. . .” Ronon started. He was confident Seraih would appreciate him coming to her with such a challenge. Still he had to sure, “If you can't do it, it's fine.”

Seraih finally looked up, shooting him a incredulous glare. “When do you need this done?”

“How soon can you do it?”

Seraih thought for a moment, unconsciously chewing on the end of one of her wayward curls. “I can have these ready for you by the end of the cycle. It will be a bit difficult without the form here but this design lends well to being adjusted to fit once it's made.”

“Ronon?”

“Yeah?”

“What is her name?” she asked. He couldn't quite place her expression, but it was a strange mix of wonder and speculation. She was understandably curious about what sort of person would warrant him going to such lengths to prepare for a "date."

Ronon was silent for a long moment as he looked into Seraih's expectant face. He had never said her name out loud before. She was always “Dr. Keller” or “Doc,” as Carson had been. At first it had helped him keep his growing interest in her at bay.

“Jennifer.” He realized then that it no longer mattered if he said her first name out loud or not. He had already fallen long ago.

. . . . . . .

Ronon watched as Jen stood at the edge of the pool and smiled. Seraih had done a good job crafting the swimsuit. Though it fit her well, Jennifer shyly wrapped her arms around her mid-section as she hesitantly immersed her bare feet in the water.

“Oh, it's warm,” she said, surprised.

“Yeah,” Ronon confirmed. Jennifer looked up at him when he spoke, then quickly averted her eyes as she blushed. Maybe she hadn't expected him to be so close to her.

“Come,” he said, taking her hands that and pulling them from around herself, leading her out into the water. As he did so he took the opportunity to savor the view of the smooth, exposed skin of her midriff. She was slim, but her body dipped and curved in all the right places in a way that was very pleasing to the eye.

“The water feels amazing,” Jennifer sighed, drawing Ronon out of his thoughts. She drew away from him then, reaching her arm out in long strokes, as she swimming to the deeper end of the pool so that her body would be completely submerged in the soothing warmth of the water.

She stopped when she had reached the center of the pool, treading in place. Ronon started swam out to join her. When he had almost reached her, Jennifer's face broke in a devilish grin, and she leaned back and swam away from him in a backstroke motion. Ronon used his size to his advantage, though, shooting his arm out to grab her ankle and gently tugged her back.

Jennifer shrieked and kicked out her other leg, splashing water into his face. He hadn't expected that, and the shock made him loosen his grip in her leg. Jennifer took the opening to turn and start swimming away from him. He was secretly impressed with her agility and speed, as she'd gotten a good distance away before he started swimming after her.

. . . . . . . . . .

It takes time to get it right
Takes no time to get it wrong.
I can't believe I didn't see
The ground was caving in

Oh, can we just start again?


. . . . . . . .

As Jennifer approached the far edge of the pool, she felt something tickling against her leg. She figured it was a jet stream of water, similar to those that were on the pools of Earth, to keep the water circulating. She didn't pay much attention as she watched Ronon catch up to her. She swam back until her back was against the pool wall and Ronon was in front of her.

Rather than treading in place, he put his arms on either side of her, using the wall as leverage to keep himself afloat, trapping her between his body and the wall; there was no mistaking his intent. Jennifer hesitated a moment before placing her hands on his shoulders; she couldn't tread properly with him this close anyway.

Something brushed against Jennifer's thigh. At first she thought it was Ronon's leg, but then something very much like a tentacle wrapped around her calf and she gasped. She tried to pull herself up and away using Ronon's body, but the thing was pulling her in the opposite direction, into the water. Hard.

. . . . . . . .

Ronon's excitement at Jennifer suddenly wrapping herself around him was short-lived as she screamed his name, her arms tightening around his neck with a vice-like grip, and then he felt himself being pulled down into the water with her. He wrapped his right arm around Jennifer's waist, and the other he braced against the ledge of the pool wall in an effort to keep them both above the surface. He could have lifted himself out of the water easily, but something very strong was pulling against Jennifer. Ronon was strong enough to hold on to her, but Jennifer was loosening her grip around his neck and he knew that this tug-of-war would not last for long. Jennifer was hurting, and she was letting go of him to lessen the pain.

Ronon took a deep breath and let go of the wall. He held on to Jennifer's waist and was pulled under with her. Still holding onto her, he angled his head down towards her legs. He saw the shape of something large and translucent, yet it was barely discernible. However, he saw clearly the more opaque tentacle wrapped around Jennifer's left leg. At present the creature continued to drag them down into the depths of the water as Ronon retrieved a small blade from his hair. Something in the back of his mind warned that it might not be the best thing to injure the creature; no way of knowing how it would react. That thought was quickly quashed by a more urgent one that screamed, Jennifer is drowning! He could feel her body stopped trying to fight against the creature, and her arms went slack around his neck. It was hard to tell if the creature was slowing or time itself.

He righted himself, drew Jennifer to him, finding her mouth with his, he breathed his remaining reserves of air into her lungs.

Then he struck out at the creature.

. . . . . . . .

Jennifer saw black spots of unconsciousness bleed into the whiteness of shock. The burning in her lungs faded into a rush of release at her treacherous body giving up the fight. A final vision of Ronon's face floating before her bleary eyes. A first and last kiss . . . it was hard to tell. But the burning subsided, and a moment later her face broke the surface. She could breath.

Then she felt her body being lifted and laid against the cool floor. Her senses came rushing back. Her lungs still burned and she coughed up the water she had inhaled in panic before being dragged beneath the surface. Someone was calling her name and a a warm hand was brushing her hair away from her face. She rolled onto her side, towards the warmth she felt. It was radiating from his body. Always.

Ronon kept his arm around her waist as he stood and pulled her up with him. “We need to get out of here,” he stated.

“Yes. Let's,” Jennifer coughed. She made to walk beside him, but when she put her weight on her left leg, a sharp sensation of pins and needles made her wince. She looked down to see that there were pink circles in two staggered columns going down the length of her calf. They looked very similar to suction marks.

“That doesn't look good,” she mumbled.

Without a word, Ronon lifted her up into his arms. Jennifer didn't protest. She'd just nearly drowned, after all.

He walked around to the other end of the pool, nearest to the exit. Ronon made quick work of collecting their clothes and the large bag he had brought, balancing Jennifer in his arms. He reached into it and brought out his gun.

“You brought a gun to go swimming?” Jennifer asked.

“Looks like I needed it,” he replied, his eyes never leaving the water as until they emerged onto the narrow walkway. Even then, he kept his eye on the pool entrance.

Ronon seemed to relax a bit once they the transporter doors slid shut.

Jennifer was felt her muscles relax as well, but it wasn't from relief. As the adrenaline wore off, her limbs felt heavy, and she was having a hard time keeping her eyes open.

“Ronon,” she mumbled as the transporter doors opened again. He stepped out, and she felt him tilt his head down to look at her. So tired. . .

“Jennifer,” Ronon shook her awake, a slight edge of worry in his voice.

“I think . . . ,” she started. It was hard for her to concentrate. “Infirmary,” she sighed sleepily, before the darkness claimed her.

—Chapter 3—

Ronon stood across from her bed, watching her sleep.

He would understand if she never wanted to speak to him again.

He would find a way to deal with the loss.

He always did.

He promised himself he would stay until she woke up.

The doctors had informed him that the creature had injected her with some sort of narcotic. It wasn't deadly, they had said, as its purpose seemed to be to render prey helpless. His insides clenched at the thought. Things had been going well. He had found out that Jennifer liked swimming as a form or recreation. He had gotten Zelenka to scan the pool to make sure what he had feared might happen didn't happen. He had even tested it out himself. Had the creature been there all along and just ignored him? Why did it decide to act now, and with Jennifer? Did it sense that she was weaker, easier prey?

Ronon shook his head, trying to rid himself of the thoughts that had plagued him for the past two hours. He should have know something was wrong when Jennifer didn't notice that he had been injured as well. He reached beneath his shirt, smoothing his hand over the bandages on his side. The cuts had not been terribly deep, not requiring stitches. Ronon was thankful for that more than anything, because he couldn't handle anyone besides Jennifer stitching him up, and the fact he was the reason she wasn't able to—

His ears trained on the sound of Jennifer's vital signs monitor, a quickening of the beep that monitored her heart rate. Her legs shifted beneath the sheets of the infirmary bed. She inhaled deeply and let out a low moan. She blinked away the sleepiness and looked around, not seeing him at first. He took a step forward.

“Hey,” was all he could think to say.

“Hey,” she said, pushing herself up in the bed.

“I'll get the doctor,” Ronon said, turning to leave.

“Wait,” Jennifer called, and he obeyed. She met his eyes, and then looked away, seeming to consider something. “I mean, I'm fine, right. I think that thing injected me with something through his tentacles.”

“Yeah,” Ronon confirmed. “That's what they said. Said they'd keep you here for a day just in case.”

Jennifer scoffed at that. “What a way to spend my first day off in two months.”

Ronon felt the twisting in his heart again.

She stared in front of her, at nothing in particular. He was still waiting for her to dismiss him, had expected her too, and was amazed that she had not yet tired of his presence.

“Thank you, Ronon.”

Ronon just stared at her, too shocked to say anything.

Jennifer took the opportunity to explain, “For getting me out, for . . . everything you went through planning the day. The clothes. It made me feel really . . . special.”

She held his gaze, her hazel eyes glistening in the dim light of the room. She ducked her face away from his view, but she couldn't hide her hand as she swiped it across her cheek and under her eye. She was upset and still trying to make him feel better about the situation. Always thinking of others first. Of him. Even when he didn't deserve it.

He sighed, trying to find the words to relieve her of the burden. “Look. I'm sorry it . . . things didn't. . .”

“No,” she interrupted. “I had fun up until. . .well. It was nice.”

Why was she making this so hard for him? She was just trying to be nice, he knew.

She seemed to sense his turmoil. “Ronon,” she soothed, “I . . . I know it's not what you wanted of the day. And that kiss wasn't at all I expected our first one to be. It's rather fuzzy actually. . .”

At that Ronon's eyes darted up to her face. She looked at him, expectantly, having intended to illicit a reaction. Her face broke into a smile that was pure sunlight, a ray of hope—of promise.

Ronon suppressed the overwhelming urge to take her face in his hand and sear her lips with a kiss she would never forget.

“So. . .what did you have planned for the rest of the evening?” she seemed genuinely curious.

Ronon looked at her, startled by the abruptness of her question. Shocked that they were even having a conversation right now. After everything.

“I mean, before the whole saving-me-from-alien-creepy-crawly fiasco?” she smirked.

Ronon took a few steps to stand right beside her bed. “Uhm . . .,” Ronon faltered as he tried to remember the proper term for it, “dinner and a movie?”

“Ah,” Jennifer nodded. “What movie?”

Iron Man.” Sheppard had said it was good, and Teyla had taken an unusual level of interest in the film's lead actor.

“Ok, then.”

“'Ok then' what?”

“Ok then, let's go. Remember, it's my day off. It would be a sin to spend it cooped up in here,” she said, throwing back the sheets.

As she did so, she was made aware of the bandages on her left leg. She wiggled her toes, and then lifted her knee, then quickly lowered it back down. “Whoah, that feels weird,” she said, laying back against the pillows, as if the sudden movement had made her dizzy. After a few seconds she looked up to him. “A little help, please?”

Ronon obliged gently sliding one arm under Jennifer's legs and the other around her back as he prepared to lift her slight form from the bed. He lifted Jennifer up, but stopped short when he saw Marie entering the ward. She looked up from the tablet in her hand, and she took in the scene before her. Jennifer's breath caught in her throat. Though she was technically “the boss,” she was nevertheless caught in an awkward position, in the process of being whisked away from the infirmary by a thoroughly smitten Satedan when she was supposed to be under observation.

“Marie. Hi,” Jennifer squeaked.

Marie straightened, maintaining a professional air. She looked from Ronon to Jennifer, and then back to Ronon. “You'll want to go out the back way,” was all she said, only her twinkling eyes betraying her otherwise cool demeanor.

Jennifer and Ronon watched in stunned silence as the woman strolled past Jennifer's bed and across the ward, her attention focused on the computer on nestled in her arm, as if she hadn't seen a thing.


Little look, little smile
Flick the switch and it's over
Like it's lost and can never be found.

But maybe there's a tiny glow
That won't die and won't leave us alone
Star shining. The sun is rising.

There's a tiny glimmer flickering on the horizon.


—“Glimmer” by Aqualung

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A/N: Well, that's the story. I hope y'all enjoyed it. It's the first story multi-chapter fic that I've completed on one go. Thank you so much for reading, and I hope you'll take the time to leave feedback, no matter how brief. It's all appreciated, and helps motivate me to write more.
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Date: 2008-09-07 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] creidh.livejournal.com
Eeee!! Srsly.. LOVE your Ronan/Keller. :)
I guess maniacally clicking on the Chapter 2 above won't make it magically appear eh?

Date: 2008-09-07 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm glad you like it so far. I tried to post the rest here, but I'm having issues with lj-cuts. I uploaded the rest to ff.net.

Read it HERE (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4525146/1/).

Date: 2008-09-07 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Ok, I got the lj thing worked out (sort of). I uploaded the whole thing to one entry.

Date: 2008-09-07 11:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] creidh.livejournal.com
I love it even more!!
Ronan.. swimming! Ronan.. in swimming trunks!! !!!!!

I like the way you tell a story. Very even tempo and nicely flowing. I didn't feel the urge to skip ahead but actually read each sentence and enjoyed it fully. No wasted space. :)

Date: 2008-09-07 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
I didn't feel the urge to skip ahead but actually read each sentence and enjoyed it fully. No wasted space. :)

Wow, that's such a huge compliment. Thanks so much for taking the time to enjoy this, too. :)

Date: 2008-09-08 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lizbet0.livejournal.com
This was a really fun story! Ronon was such a sweetie with all his preparations.

Now I want to know what the critter was, though, and why it didn't show up on Zelenka's scan. *wink*

Date: 2008-09-08 07:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thanks. I was kinda nervous about how this fic would go over as far as believability.

And I did consider going into more detail about the critter, but I decided that it wasn't important to the overall story. Somethings are best left unanswered. ;)

Date: 2008-09-09 03:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tardiscalling84.livejournal.com
Sorry I've been MIA for so freakin' long. I'm email later.

I love this story.

"Ronon was thankful for that more than anything, because he couldn't handle anyone besides Jennifer stitching him up..."
This is the best line ever. Really, you convey so much about Ronon and how he feels without actually having to say it.

Perfect. Although I do still need to see Iron Man.

Date: 2008-09-09 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Heyyyy...*tackles*

I was wondering about you. You would have been getting a note from me pretty soon, so I'm glad to see you're still alive. :)

Even more happy that you enjoyed the story. :) And yes, you must see the awesomeness that is RDJ as Iron Man. I still have yet to see The Dark Knight though, but it managed to make half a billion dollars at the box office without my contribution.

Looking forward to the email. *hugs*

Date: 2008-09-16 07:52 am (UTC)
tielan: city of atlantis (SGA)
From: [personal profile] tielan
Cute and enjoyable! Lovely story. I like that they're both a little awkward about this relationship (or whatever it is) - and the touches of humour are great.

Date: 2008-09-16 03:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] renisanz.livejournal.com
Thank you! So glad you like it. I do love exploiting Ronon and Jen's awkwardness. They both experience in different ways. And yes, it is very cute, I think. :)

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